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Hmm...eu am inceput sa scriu poezii cam de un an...in ultimul timp nu prea am mai scris nimic, dar m-am hotarat sa postez cateva...
Vreau sa imi spuneti sincer dak sunt frumoase sau nu...dak nu va place ceva va rog sa-mi ziceti...Nu sunt foarte lungi, dar fiecare are o mare semnificatie pentru mine...de fiecare data cand am scris o poezie am vrut sa exprim niste sentimente...nu stiu dak am reusit, darlucrul asta cred k mi-l veti spune voi...
Pentru inceput voi pune o poezie...dak mai vreti sa citit si altele imi spuneti si va mai pun.

Storm

When the most powerful thunder is heard
You feel that your arm by your body is separated.
It can shake the hole world
And you can’t pronounce any word.
The face of the world is changing,
Step by step the storm is coming,
The wind is stumbling like a mad
Over everything and you’re sad.
Long blades of fire are crossing,
And enormous branches are burning.
A thin and long knife
Seems to be your entire life.
There is a tireless valley of a white terror
Which brings you only oblivion and horror.
Odd, white and blue eyes are watching you
And in a different world that isn’t yours they are calling you.

31 ianuarie 2007

Founder Data inscrierii: 25/Iun/2007 Mesaje: 608

wow

mi-a placut... bv :w00t:

Ok...hai k mai pun :-)

Snow

It is pouring with snow,
Everything is covered now
With a white dress
And the world is restless.

It is snowing with roars of laughter.
The flowers of frost are somber,
Bringing my feelings back,
Changing everything in black.

It’s snowing with the teeth of the snowmen,
Covering the world with pure velvet,
The snowfall of the snowdrop,
Making my tears to drop.

Snowflakes are running droved away
By the frost which comes into my way,
Fluttering creatures like the butterflies,
Freezing my soul when they fly.

Toothed flowers,
Bringing your powers,
From ashes of sugar are snowing
And my pain is growing.

5 februarie 2007

tare tari poeziile...mai vreau :-D

Moderator Data inscrierii: 26/Iul/2007 Mesaje: 340

Am scris si eu mai demult o poezie..sau ma rog un cantec :-)

Angel

The bleeding sky above her head
Is now turning into grey
Her dreams, her hopes seem to be dead
And now she's fading away

refren:

Desperately she is screaming
But no one seems to hear
The fear inside her is still growing
But no one is near

Her dark wings once spread
Are now lying on the ground
The angel is defeated
But no one seems to mind

refren:

Desperately she is screaming
But no one seems to hear
The fear inside her is still growing
But no one is near

:-)

foarte dragut :-)

Member 3 Data inscrierii: 29/Aug/2007 Mesaje: 280

super mi-a plakut aia cu "snow" de la QueenOfVampires !!!! bravo
si am scris niste poezi dar nu le pun k radeti!!! roll1

Mi-a placut cantecul tau Nightchild si merci mult motherearth_queen

She looks at the clouds
The clouds are moving on
The darkness is coming
Now when he's gone
She walks in the night
To make her own way
There's no one with her
She feels like a stray.
She's searching for him
She screems and she cries
The pain is collected
In her big blue eyes
Her body is freezy
Her eyes are so cold
Her face is framed
By her hair made of gold
She's watching the angels
How they fly away
But for his salvation
She can only pray
The sky is clouding over
And his end is near
She wants just to join him
And she has no fear
Her heart is beating faster
She only wants to die
Her pain must be over
She has to say goodbye

....

eram beata cand am scris-o

pe langa asta, mai am si alte creatii dar cam horny...nu le scriu :D